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[词] 贺新郎 清风妩

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发表于 2021-5-21 22:29 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式


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发表于 2021-5-21 22:46 | 显示全部楼层
陈旧时光谁人问,犹记烟窗旧户

韶华一别流年误。念滔天、三千洛水,幽篁烟雨。

江畔桃花风吹尽,谁赋楚词寄取。*
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非常喜欢这几句,整首词意象有些乱,有待推敲~




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发表于 2021-5-22 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
公主这幅画面诗意很浓厚
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 楼主| 发表于 2021-5-23 09:48 | 显示全部楼层
子非鱼 发表于 2021-5-21 22:46
陈旧时光谁人问,犹记烟窗旧户

韶华一别流年误。念滔天、三千洛水,幽篁烟雨。

谢谢您的点评,有时间我再缕缕
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 楼主| 发表于 2021-5-23 09:49 | 显示全部楼层
上海朝阳 发表于 2021-5-22 12:10
公主这幅画面诗意很浓厚

谢谢上海朝阳的欣赏!
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发表于 2021-5-23 18:56 | 显示全部楼层
豌豆公主 发表于 2021-5-23 09:48
谢谢您的点评,有时间我再缕缕

不客气,豌豆真是笔耕不辍呀~
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